Rachel V. 3G

The Horrible Fall

Can we go in the tree house? I asked. I’m at my friend Miranda’s house and I really want to go in the tree house. I just asked her if we could. She said only if we where rain boots. So we went inside and got our rain boots on. Just before we went back outside we heard the door bell we went to go and answer it. It was for Miranda’s bigger sister Arantxa. When Arantxa opened the door I saw my bigger sister Logan and her other friend Mia. Then we went outside and went up to the tree house. Arantxa, Logan, and Mia came up to. We climbed up the ladder and opened the door. Mia came up the trap door. Miranda told Mia to tell everyone else not to go down the trap door only to go up it. But Mia forgot and didn’t tell anybody. I was on my way to go down the trap door. But I didn’t know that I couldn’t go down that way. I opened the trap door and put my first foot down, and then I slipped and CRASH! I fell on my back. I started to cough weekly I got the wind knocked out of me. My sister asked Miranda what happened (Miranda was down there to) She said Rachel fell. My sister asked exactly how far? She fell out of the trap door, Miranda said. What! My sister screamed. Then my sister rushed down to see me. She asked me if I was ok I couldn’t speak. Miranda’s mom and dad came rushing out to. They asked me if I was ok I still couldn’t say a word. For weeks I was in pain my mom took me to the doctor to get checked. The doctor said to get some acupuncture It will help the pain go away. It really hurt a lot. But I knew I had to get it if I wanted to get better.